Sunday, January 11, 2009

Piggybacking what I have so far.....

Ok I need a little help. Here is what I have so far on my piggyback story and I am at a loss. Granted I am not very far yet. So any suggestions will be very helpful!!! Thanks! ~Tiff

The two men appeared out of nowhere, a few yards apart in the narrow moonlit lane. Ben looked around in surprise. He was meeting some lady named Sandy and she wasn’t due for another five minutes. That’s what his note said anyway.
“Are you Ben? I’m Sandy.” He looked around at the dumpsters. “Sorry for the cloak and dagger stuff”
“Goodbye”
“Don’t leave yet. At least hear me out.”
Ben turned back around. “You’ve got to be kidding me?”

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